English: Parallel structures (parallelism)
Tutoring high school and college English, you mention parallelism. The tutor introduces it.
Non-parallel: I like drawing, reading, and to play the piano.
Parallel: I like drawing, reading, and playing the piano.
Let’s compare the two examples above. In the Parallel one, all the speaker’s activities are listed in the same form; therefore, parallelism is achieved. In the Non-parallel one, drawing and reading are in -ing (gerund) form, while to play is in infinitive form.
Parallel structures are parts of a sentence that have similar construction. What creates parallelism is the way those parts are written rather than their meaning.
In the academic world, parallelism is viewed fondly – failure to execute it, disapprovingly. Last I heard, English 12 government exams are marked with consideration for parallel structures. A sentence like the “Non-parallel” example above would likely receive a deduction for “faulty parallelism.”
While English is mainly about content, markers like style as well. A few nice touches – like parallelism – can elevate a teacher’s perception of a paper from “good” to “very good”, or from “very good” to “great.” Hopefully, that paper will be yours:)
Jack of Oracle Tutoring by Jack and Diane, Campbell River, BC.
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